Saturday, April 16, 2011

Blog a day Kick off

You may be tired of hearing from me this next month or so, but I'm hoping that you'll still check in and read these next few posts. I'm going to post scenes from Haunting Footsteps and interviews with the characters. Have a question you would ask these characters if they were real and had the opportunity? I am opening the door to the universe I live in to give you that chance. Just e-mail me your questions at AndiPray@gmail.com and I will add them in the interviews. Who knows. There could be some freebies behind the madness to my methods. :D Have a great day and enjoy today's blog.


Spring Break! To many it's full of great many memories and the chance to break away from all responsibilities - especially college. Some travel, party, or veg in bed all day. Some even (GASP!) take advantage of the time to work on their college papers to take some of the pressure off the last few weeks of school. There should be a law against doing homework during spring break.


However, one spring break creates a nightmare for our hero, Victor. In Haunting Footsteps, we open or first few pages to see Victor re-encountering that nightmare as he tries to sleep. Enjoy today's excerpt and if you have questions for Victor's interview as we'll be jumping back and forth through our main characters, even our evil, stalking janitor, to ask them how they felt about this part in their lives. Today, I think when Victor wakes up from his reoccurring nightmare, he says it all.






When Victor grumbled about being bored, the
unwanted spectacle in front of him was not what he had in 
mind for entertainment. The only reason he stepped 
through the smoky door was JD’s promise; as soon as the

annoying, roommate drank too much, they would ditch 
him back at the dorm. The egotistical, rich boy owned a 
sweet ride, and Victor and JD planned to take it out for a 
tour of the town...or even farther if they wished.


As he watched the scandalous display in front of him, 
Victor did not realize his jaw had dropped until the 
dryness in his throat formed an oversized choking lump. 
His paralyzed mouth only closed on instinct to swallow

the sickening burn in an attempt to breathe again.

He did not want to believe what he saw!

Her long body strode by in slow movements. She spun 
around, and slid down the rickety and tarnished pole to 
crawl like a wildcat. Her glazed look remained blind to 
the jeers, whistles, and fists raised with an assortment of 
dollar bills in sacrificial offering to their mythical 
goddess.



He knew her—the real her. The empty green eyes were 
just a shell of the young girl he once loved—now they 
reflected nothing of her. Her dance moves were a 
complete one-eighty from the ballet she studied at which

he had marveled. This was a complete contradiction from 
the cheers she used to encourage him on the football field. 
The silver ring still decorating her right hand caught his

attention as it shimmered in the strobe lights and stood 
out all wrong in a place like this. Her being in a place like 
this was wrong. The ring represented the promise of 
purity until marriage, but the so-called “Gentlemen’s

Club” he’d been wrangled into held nothing pure.

The identical ring he still wore, out of sentiment, felt 
ice-cold against his burning flesh. His pulse raced with an 
inferno of anger. His fists clenched tight, wanting to

release their fury, knock some heads together, and get her 
out of there.


Who became his main target? The creep who dragged 
him in there promising delusions of grandeur Victor never 
dreamed she would be a part of.



“Gentlemen.” A familiar voice spoke behind him, 
adding to his nightmare.


Victor and JD looked back to see Pastor Jon give them 
a chastising look and beckon them to follow him.



“You don’t want to be here tonight,” the youth pastor 
warned, as he led them to a bar vacated by those wanting 
a closer look at the show on the cheap catwalk.



“That says a lot coming from ‘a man of the cloth,’” JD 
sneered and leaned against the scarred wood, his eyes 
inquisitive and accusing.


“One who sees college has not improved your taste in 
friends, Mr. Daniels.”


JD shook his head with a disgusted low grunt and 
looked toward their former table still occupied by his 
roommate and a smelly ogre of a biker. “I didn’t choose 
the snobby creep for anything. College administration 
assigned us together. So, what’s the problem?”



Victor tried to concentrate on his friend, who always 
bore a defensive attitude around anyone of authority 
questioning his actions, but his own eyes kept wandering 
back to her. No matter how it sickened Victor to see what

had become of her, he could not stop watching Kinsey. He 
feared if she left his sight for an instant, he would lose her 
again.



“That.”

Victor heard the youth pastor’s curt answer, but it took 
JD’s forced shove against his shoulder to divert his 
attention from the stage to follow the clergyman’s 
pointing finger. Victor’s worst nightmare blackened

further. He knew the dancer on stage, and he knew the 
man sauntering through the main entrance. It was not just 
the mandatory ID flashed, but also the shining badge of 
Officer Donovan Huntingdon—Victor’s grandfather.



After a short conversation, the bouncer pointed the way 
to their previous table.



“What’s going on?” Victor demanded.

“Your buddy’s about to spend an extended spring 
break vacation behind bars,” Pastor Jon sighed.



“Ted? So what? You’re here to watch?” JD asked.

“I’m here on a social services call…”

Victor watched the youth pastor stop in mid-sentence 
as his eyes froze on the well-applauded scene on stage.



Could Victor’s expression have been a mirror image of 
when the dance first started?



“It’s her, isn’t it?” Victor demanded. “I didn’t want to 
believe it, but it is Kinsey.”



Her dance routine stayed close enough to the edge to 
allow patrons to continue to stuff crumpled money into the 
scant black cloth that shimmered in silver sequins and 
barely covered her. As she reached for the pole at the end 
of the catwalk, she leaned out into the pawing crowd, and 
a set of hands grabbed her to pull her offstage.



Kinsey fought and protested as a bald man trapped her 
body on his lap. Victor did not need to hear the brawny 
man’s words to know Kinsey did not like what he said. His

laughter rumbled in a roar that echoed through the bar 
before his mouth forced a rough and clumsy kiss on her 
lips.



Her feeble fists beat at the muscled shoulders beneath 
the tattered, sleeveless shirt. Her screams and pleas to be 
let go ripped Victor’s heart as he pushed his way through 
the gathering crowd.



“Let her go!” Victor’s own demanding thought came 
from another voice beside him.


The bartender rushed over with an aluminum bat in his 
hands. It reflected the strobe lights as he gripped it 
threateningly and thumped it in his open palm.

“The dancers are only to watch! No touching except 
tips!”



“Oh, I’d pay more than a fat tip for a piece of this!” 
the bald man’s raspy laughter taunted. 

He held Kinsey out 
of reach to avoid her scratching finger nails.


“He said let her go!" Victor commanded, as he 
stepped even closer.



The bald man stood straight and tall, towering over 
him. As JD stepped up to stand beside Victor, one of the 
bald brute’s friends took Kinsey. She looked dazed and 
confused as she tried to fight against the tight hands, but

her drunken state made her appear more like a marionette 
on tangled strings.


“What’s she to you, kid?” asked the giant.

“She does not appear to want your company,” Victor 
said, taking a step closer to the man easily holding off 
Kinsey’s attempts to resist.


The man who pulled her off the stage threw back his 
head and laughed.


“Victor!” called a voice he did not want to draw 
interest from, but looking around Victor saw his 
conversation was the center of attention.


A sudden blindside punch threw Victor to the ground. 
The next thing he knew, the whole bar exploded around 
him as though everyone had an opinion on the subject of 
Kinsey. Shattering glass rained down in jagged shards. 
Booze splashed everywhere—mixing, spraying, splattering 
and drenching everything, creating a slippery path.


Kinsey’s frightened screams escaped as she lay just 
within reach of him. Victor stretched out for her; his 
fingertips could almost brush hers. He could take her 
hand and leave with her. He would never want to let go or 
have her return to this place. If he could just move a little 
closer...



Just as his fingers grazed hers, a hand caught his arm 
and yanked him back.


“Kinsey!”

“C’mon, Victor, before your grandpa catches you,” JD 
warned, pulling him up from the slick floor.


“I can take her with me!” Victor knew he could protect 
her. That was all he had wanted to do since the day she 
jump-roped into his life.


In all the chaos, JD dragged him out against his will— 
against his need to help her.


“I have to go back,” Victor declared, straining against 
his friend’s hold. He had just found her. The thought that 
he came across her in a hole in the ground did not matter 
now that the shock had worn off. All he knew was he could 
not leave her in there.


“Are you nuts?” JD asked with blood streaming from 
his nose.


“I have to help her!” Victor tried to yank away, but JD 
would not let go.


“There’s nothing you can do except get arrested. Now 
come on.”


JD continued to pull him away as Pastor Jon stepped 
out. Before Victor could utter a sound, the young 
clergyman pushed him back.


“Go. I will take care of her,” Pastor Jon promised and 
kept a hand on Victor’s chest, trying to get him to calm 
down.


“But I have to help,” Victor repeated his argument.

“No. You can’t.”

Victor did not understand. Surely, this man did not 
forget the relationship he once shared with the frightened 
young woman.


“I can’t just leave her,” Victor tried one last time, 
determined to rescue her.


“And I can’t let you go back in there. It’s too
dangerous. I’ll tell you what I can later.”

“That’s not good enough!”

“It’s all I have,” Pastor Jon said before turning and 
disappearing back inside the club.


Gunshots sounded.
~ * ~
Victor woke from the familiar dream. The memories of her up on the stage still haunted him. It always started the same, and he woke up at the same spot, not wanting to leave her—fearing for her life. He wiped the sweat from his face and looked at the red numbers on the digital alarm clock. Time to go for his run and pray the fresh air helped with the pain.

He picked up the framed photograph from their freshman Christmas dance, and stared at her smile. His finger traced her face, as he closed his eyes again.

The memory had come back to him the past week, more and more vivid each night. How he wished it meant he would see her again soon. It would tie up so many loose ends from the past, and maybe heal the hole she left in his soul. If only she would answer the questions no one else would. He needed to see her again, hear her voice, and know the truth.

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